sam
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18 Aug 08 8:21 am
Hey kiwiboy, I read your article, and I can say that there's not much information in the body itself.
Readers want to get information right away - give them a little bit of meat on "how to be a good wife" - say, about 2 or 3 pointers as a start. If they like it, they would want more from you - that's when they click your link (and Google might also think that your article is more relevant to the search term that you're targeting for).
May the force be with you! :idea: