jcdean
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28 Apr 10 12:24 pm
My eyes kinda jumped all over the place. Perhaps to much info all at once above the fold?
No head line asking a question to draw me in, like "Do you know the biggest SEO mistake you are probably making and is costing you money? " (Just pulled that out of the air but hope yo see my point, about an attention grabbing headline) Then you could explain what the tools on you site can do for them.
Good luck with that.
P.S. Moderators my interpret this post as spam, be carefull if that was not your intent, forum marketing can be profitable if done right, you have to gain the trust of the people in the forum first.