Please review my site! I need some advice!

20 Aug 09 4:12 pm

Hey Everyone! Any help is greatly appreciated!!!
Thanks and best of luck to all!
Mark

20 Aug 09 11:52 pm

Hey Mark,

1. Your header height could be a bout a 1/4 of an inch thinner ( 1cm ) but this is not a big one.. just cosmetic.
2. Where is your opt in box and free report to capture visitors info?
3. There is waayyy to much space down the bottom unless you plan to put some photo's with links there.
4. The page is reallly wide on my square screen.. 1024x768
Can the words be widened out a little? maybe put more to the center?
Not sure on this one.. Just looks very airy to me.
5. Your affiliate link needs to be above the fold.
6. Your mouse over links need to have a highlight or line on them if I mouse over... as I am not quite sure what I am clicking on ( This is a small cosmetic thing but I feel is important ) up to you.
7. You need a site map link at the bottom
8. Don't forget to put a C copyright symbol.

Ok, enough bashing you over the head...lol

Regards
Troy

25 Aug 09 5:33 am

Hi Mark,

Your site looks good. You just need to tidy it up a little. Here are some points that may help:

* It may be better to place images on your other pages.

* Make your affiliate links more obvious and call people to action- 'Click here for...' or 'Go to this page for...'

* It looks more professional if you use the same fonts on your pages. I saw at least 3 different fonts on your articles - first 2 pages has one font type, third to fifth pages have another and the seventh page is different also.

* Spelling mistakes on these titles on the left navigation sidebar:
Attracttng Beautiful Women to Date-Six Powerful Tips to Mastery
Women and Attracttion

* There are no affiliate links on this page. Both are internal links.
http://www.learn-how-to-pick-up-women.c ... astery.htm

* Two pages have no affiliate links at all:
http://www.learn-how-to-pick-up-women.c ... d-back.htm
http://www.learn-how-to-pick-up-women.c ... x-back.htm

* Clean up the titles of these pages to make it look more professional:
http://www.learn-how-to-pick-up-women.c ... e-tips.htm (capitalize words on the title)
http://www.learn-how-to-pick-up-women.c ... -women.htm (comma at the end)

* As cjfuss suggested, it would be best if you have your keywords on the meta description. For your homepage, what keyword are your targeting? I assume it's 'how to pick up women' yet it's not on the meta keyword and description.
If you haven't done so, try running your pages on Traffic Travis page analysis. The tool will give you suggestions on how to get a higher rating.

* You've done a good job on building backlinks. Make sure your anchor texts contain your keywords on the page it is linking to.

Hope that helps. All the best!


Ampie :)

26 Aug 09 4:05 am

Hey mdf212,
I like the site, but did want to mention that your article how to flirt with women and 5 tips on how to flirt with women is the same article.
Spun articles submitted as you have one can get your word out to many blogs and other resources, however, some of those may not have much, if any traffic. I would suggest you create and submit quality articles to sites such as ezinearticles and goarticles. In addition, you can join helium and ehow and actually earn money on your submitted article as well.
Wishing you success.
Kim

02 Sep 09 5:28 pm

Thanks Kim I will check out helium