jcdean
Posts: 373
Joined: 24 Nov 09
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31 Dec 09 3:20 am
Site looks nice.
Perhaps the first line of the text could be changed to a question to insure the reader is drawn in to the artical. Something like "What is the number one reason people fail to be successfull" or " Would you like to know the one little secret to my sucess"
Just a thought.