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Feedback On My Website Please
pierrer85
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18 May 14 2:12 pm

Feedback On My Website Please

my name is Pierre I need some help to make some money with this site I have
no idea how to get traffic is any one can help I will be greatly appreciate it
thank you this is the site
http://www.theyellowschoolbus.net

I there is any improvement that can be made on it please help
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cecille.l
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19 May 14 6:53 am

 Hi Pierre,

I'm unable to view your site. I get the following error:
Error establishing a database connection


Please check your website with your hosting provider. It could be down, or they may be something wrong with it.

Hope that helps. Please let us know how you get on. All the best!
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alan roy hocking
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19 May 14 1:22 pm

 Yep I'm getting the same database connection error?

Have you spelt it correctly?
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mark schaaf
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22 May 14 4:10 pm

 I saw the site but don't understand why on a site that seems to be promoting educational things has an ad banner on the right selling guided tours.
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cecille.l
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23 May 14 7:01 am

 Hi Pierre,

I'm able to view your site now.

Your site looks ok as far as the design and layout but the content needs to be tweaked. You have an optin form at the top for your newsletter, but it doesn't say what the newsletter is for or what I would get from it. It's important to let users know what they're signing up for and what they would get from it.

I suggest you check the widgets you have on the sidebar. You can delete the Meta widget and replace that with a list of your recent posts or the categories on your site. Move the ad further down.

There doesn't appear to be a clear definition of what your site is and who it is for. It clearly has information on education, but for whom? Who is your target market? Is it a resource site for children or for young adults? What programs do you recommend and who are they for?

I suggest you look at your article and determine who they are for. Check your target keywords too. Are they targeting the correct traffic for your site?

Hope that helps. Have a good weekend!
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alan roy hocking
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03 Jun 14 4:35 pm

 Hi Pierre

I have to agree with Cecille now that I can see your site.

You're asking if I want to receive a daily newsletter but you're not telling me why I would want one or what I would gain if I did get one?

Alan
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doublebonus10
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07 Jun 14 7:30 am

 I am also agree with @alan roy hocking . I see this a newsletter service. But i do not know what did he want from this site ?
I am not interested about newsletter service. Because it should be full of my inbox.
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fnconsulting
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18 Jun 14 5:48 pm

 I have to agree with the other posts: the page doesn't state why i should subscribe

pierrer85 wrote:my name is Pierre I need some help to make some money with this site I have
no idea how to get traffic is any one can help I will be greatly appreciate it
thank you this is the site
http://www.theyellowschoolbus.net

I there is any improvement that can be made on it please help
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