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Need a few ideas about my site - ran ads but dont have sales
curtis1974
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07 Dec 09 6:55 am

Need a few ideas about my site - ran ads but dont have sales

Hi all, I want a few comments on this site please. I build this site using site rubix over at wealthy affiliate. I tried it on ppc got a few clicks to the landing pages but no sale. Whats wrong with this site? I ran ads for one week and paid over 40 in click cost but no sale. :(

Any help will do, how to improve, drop it or fix it...



Thanks,
Curtis
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Last edited by sydney on 25 Mar 11 12:25 am, edited 2 times in total.
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thundercomes
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07 Dec 09 12:03 pm

 Hi
The spelling on the headline is all wrong my friend, what is a "stuned un-looker" surely that should be "stunned onlookers"
that should help.
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curtis1974
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07 Dec 09 12:56 pm

 thanks for the help
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redlotus
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08 Dec 09 3:17 am

 Curtis:
Keep at it! I really think fixing the headline will make a difference as many people would stop reading right there. You are smart to ask for feedback. You will find that people are always happy to help. Good luck. Keep us posted!
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